*groans* Celebrate. *hands in air*

Ch. 5 “At the Line” is done - needs a bit of cut and polish though. The next chapter 6 will, with any luck, write itself as it wont be dealing with all that noise that was Ch.5. Fingers crossed it wont be too...horrible to read when I publish it. It feels like I’ve written a lot of different branches of the story so i'm optimistic that I picked something of readable interest (to me) at least.

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On Chapter 7; Magic In Magic Out, Snow Day, A Little Change (Now Live)

I’m a little worried about the pacing for chapter 7. Or more importantly if Sombra’s character has changed too quickly. I’m probably right, if I’m worrying about it then something’s probably off. I hope that’s just me, and it’s not too glaring for readers all the same.

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Looking gwood.

I'm thinking...If there's one thing I may need to go over once the story is done it's Cadance’s character and influence on the story...hmm. Ostensible, she’s the Gaston of the story. (Still haven’t used that line, “No one does love, like Cadance.” Cadance said.)

And, aah….Ch. 5 is haunting me still….aahh. Not particularly happy with it but it felt necessary to kick the story forward...where o where art thou noble editors and critics…

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